Feedback from the Rough Cut

Feedback from the Rough Cut



When we received the class feedback we were already aware of the changes we needed to make before hand, but having a few from fellow peers was helpful for when we re shot some scenes. Most people commented on:

- Lighting and how it needed to be improved as it looked grainy


-Certain audio's needed to be taken out, e.g. the light switch


- Font needed changing as it wasn't completely clear if it matched with the genre


- I needed to look more scared as my acting wasn't very convincing that I was scared


- And the ending needed clearing up.


When we re shot everything, we changed all the errors and replaced them with a better quality. We made the lighting better on all the scenes that were lacking with decent lighting, we added lots of Foley to make certain sounds stand out more and sounds a lot more scary. We added a gasping sound effect to make me sound more shocked and almost speechless. We got rid of the ending and left it on more of a cliff hanger, (is Emma dead? does she make it out okay?) This creates enigma codes for the audience so that it only appears as an opening scene, and not an ending scene. We need more research into fonts, and got rid of some of the screens that just had text, and it appeared to look more like a trailer to some students.