This was my film pitch for "A Tale of Two Cows", which I presented to the class. The feedback I received was generally positive, but I was criticised on things such as my presentation of the enigma code and my marketing. Also I was criticised on my originality, as films like mine had been done before such as "Chicken Run" and "Madagascar".
On average I got:
Title - 7/10
Characters and cast - 8/10
Enigma codes - 5/10
Narrative suitable for audience - 8/10
Genre conventions - 7/10
Film being different - 6/10
Marketing - 6/10
Overall grade - 47/70